“I can’t read this stuff no more!”
The drivel spewed out by our publishing industry!
“Women’s fiction”–what is that supposed to mean? Really, you’d have to be a sap to read this stuff. I get paid for reading stuff, and I won’t read this.
What kind of goofy names are these to give your characters? Yes, I know, people do that in real life. Do they ever. But fiction is supposed to provide us with an escape from real life. Here the effect is more like tunneling into a German prison camp than out of it.
Hint: If the phrase “mysterious and sexy” appears anywhere near the book, don’t read it.